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 Broken Fences (2008)
IMDB rating: 4.50
Plot: Joe lives a life of solitude by choice on a ranch in the mountains of Colorado, asking no one to feel sorry for him. A widower, he has his daily routine of ranch chores interrupted one evening by a call from his just paroled son, Dylan. Dylan is a good kid that has a dark cloud that seems to follow him wherever he goes. He hasn’t spoken to his father in years and has nowhere else to go. Reluctantly, Joe takes Dylan in under the condition that he has changed his ways. The two slowly start to repair their rocky relationship when the ill fortune that follows Dylan strikes again. The ensuing incident sets forth a chain reaction of events that will cause dire consequences for everyone involved.
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i find here Broken Fences
Directors: McGatlin Troy
Actors: Van Sickle Jan,Parker Ryan J.,Walker Wesley,Himber Robert,LeVasseur Bill,Drama,Western,
Opinions on this poem?
When I finally finish something I ask for advice. Opinions would be appreciated. Thank you!
in an endless field of sun kissed daisies
he plucks their petals on a lonely prayer
amongst an excess of true loves debris
his childish dreams are lost upon the air
he hums melodies of she loves me so
as he destroys the daisies with such ease
the fragile petals flutter to and fro
as their sturdy roots are broken by the breeze
dismembered dreams fence this weary lover
he casts another flower to his side
he picks another stem and dreams of her
in this field of flowers this young man hides
please, pale daisy; what do you have to say?
she does not love me, but will there come a day?
oh, I have woven daisy chains
and as I write this verse,
petals from the ringlet on my head
fall to the earth.
can we count on daisies, then,
to predict love’s uncrossed paths?
venus herself frowns upon this
do not incur her wrath
all been said, I wish the best
for your heart and all it’s travels
to fin a love which roots so deep
that it won’t come unraveled.
very nice poem- I keep forgetting what a good writer you are. I think blah blah blah distracts me…
lovechild | Jan 30, 2010
i like it. i like it not
Charles | Jan 30, 2010
I really like the imagery a lot.
But I have a hard time reading poems that rhyme (although that’s probably just me)
Maybe some some more adjectives? I don’t know. I really like it. Will you do mine?
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Michelle | Jan 30, 2010
I like it. It tells a story that a lot of people can relate to and it kept me wanting to read more. Really got me in the story.
Summer of 2010 | Jan 30, 2010
i love this poem its so good and the ending is perfect dont change anything about the poem it is absolutly perfect
basketballplayer11 | Jan 30, 2010
I really enjoyed your poem, you got talent
al w | Jan 30, 2010
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Wheelsqueak | Jan 30, 2010